Can folks take a look at

[ColinUK]

Not a plea for donations (but clearly won’t turn any away!) but rather for input into the wording I’ve used for my JustGiving page.

JustGiving/FatManRunningAsBestHeCan

Does it look ok?
Am I striking the right note?
Is there anything you’d want to see or anything I’ve included which you’d rather I hadn’t?

I’m going to change the cover photo probably to the route map for the event.

And thank you for your input!

 

[Grannylorraine]

Looks fine to me Colin, I always feel when I do my justgiving pages that as long as what I write is from the heart, that is what matters. BTW plodder I call myself a slogger.

 

[ColinUK]

My main concern is that I can waffle on and also write in circles sometimes. I wanted this to be clear and concise.

And thank you for taking a look and feeding back 🙂

 

[helli]

Looks good to me too with one very pedantic comment: some times you have written "Diabetes UK" and sometimes "Diabetes U.K." I think it is without the dots.

But congratulations on going for it - I think it is brilliant that you have set yourself this target.

 

[Gwynn]

Looks good to me. Not too long. Not too short. Tells your story well. Good luck

 

[Kaylz]

Looks good to me, I'll donate when I get paid next month if I can and I'll also share on my Facebook xx

 

[ColinUK]

Looks good to me, I'll donate when I get paid next month if I can and I'll also share on my Facebook xx

Thank you!
And thank you

 

[ColinUK]

Looks good to me too with one very pedantic comment: some times you have written "Diabetes UK" and sometimes "Diabetes U.K." I think it is without the dots.

But congratulations on going for it - I think it is brilliant that you have set yourself this target.

And for the life of me I can’t figure out an easy way of editing that typo out!

 

[ColinUK]

Looks fine to me Colin, I always feel when I do my justgiving pages that as long as what I write is from the heart, that is what matters. BTW plodder I call myself a slogger.

And thank you

 

[mage 1]

Looks good to me